Feedback on what Mr Holloway commented on my blog

After reading your comments I now know that I must go into more detail when analysing work. I must also become more specific in what I am saying so that I do not waste time rambling or talking about things that are not important. -For example I will start to use the media terminology more and incorporate them more into what must be shared. Furthermore, I will go into more detail when writing conclusions or writing more about something. This will all me to get more out of what I say to improve my mark overall.